Let's write a story

For our Monday writing challenge I thought we could have a go at writing a piece of flash fiction together. It's going to be messy, it might not even make any sense, but I don't care.

I'll start us off with the beginning fo a story. The first person to see this post then continues the story in the comments at the point where I left off.

Then the first person to see that comment continues the story where the previous commenter left off. And on we go. I will wrap it up at some point and hopefully give it an ending.

Here goes...

EYES

His eyes said he always got what he wanted. Always.

Freya concentrated on tuning out his soothing voice, his carefully chosen words, that cute, lop-sided grin.

Just focus on his eyes, she told herself. His real self is revealed right there.

She couldn't let herself forget that.

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